Friday, July 4, 2008

I Just Cant... Comments

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What do you do,
when you have so much inside?
What do you do,
when you so stuff to hide?
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millie st.claire
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Surya . 07 June 2009

a very nice poem.concluding para is very good ' want to believe in you, I want to be with you. But i just cant, so what do you do? ' voted10 surya

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Kyle Shield Laster 16 July 2008

like the struggle going on. and format is great too. another nice piece.

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Joey Habib 08 July 2008

yo fo'real you got it... i like reading your poems they say alot of the same things that im feeling to... its gr8 stuff... keep it movin....

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