Tuesday, August 9, 2016

I Just Can't Live Without You! Comments

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I just can't live without you
How are you living without me
I just can't breathe
My emotions are frozen
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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 December 2021

In frustration tears flows down and a sense of depression descends I try writing down my thoughts...the poetic expression is intense, poignant and terribly beautiful.

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Nabakishore Dash 06 December 2021

an excellent poem depicting the pangs of separation in love.But this tolerance would increase multiple times the joy of union.

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Akhtar Jawad 16 August 2017

A heart touching human, human sentiments beautifully painted.

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Souren Mondal 30 September 2016

We should all, at some point or other in our lives, realise that keeping emotions locked up in our hearts is unhealthy. Poetry, or any form of art for that, is a great way to relieve ourselves from the feelings within. Beautifully written Arzoo.

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Kishore Kumar Das 22 August 2016

A heart-touching poem on separation from love....the feelings of vacuum and pain in the heart.....aptly described in your mesmerizing lines..

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B.m. Biswas 17 August 2016

well... l like most....solitude fills the emptiness......and your idea to be calmed by writing down it is the result of the very poetry...n.irfan also says...... a well written poem... in this condition. I request you and all the commenters to read my poem...From Body to Poetic Bin.........thanks.

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Abduhoo Salamath 15 August 2016

Touching words... the very depths meaning poiem...great..

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M Asim Nehal 11 August 2016

A profound poem on the subject of longing love, you have mastered on this subject, I agree with Nosheen's comment......100+++

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Nosheen Irfan 11 August 2016

This is a very intense write. Emotions are gushing and the reader feels purified in their profundity. It speaks for me too. I can relate. Very cathartic write. And the last verse says a lot about the power of poetry.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 August 2016

Memories! ! My emotions are frozen; because, true love touches the heart so deep. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kelly Kurt 09 August 2016

Absence of love is a rending thing. Writing is good therapy. I hope your heart finds peace

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