I am the stone, Rimbaud, you are the sun in our Liopetri*,
you the wine, me the ship going to the harbour of love,
we are two stars joined by the celestial lace.
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wow...very pretty poem...the best part was 'You function in me, I function in you. I is you.' well done....10 Hataw
A wonderful expression in choicest words. I liked the line 'I am the ship for the harbour of love' and the 'heavenly lace' to tie the two. Deserves a full ten. Regards,
wonderfully written! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! u get 10/10+++++++++++
nice expressions- you the wine--i the ship both stars entwined by the lace +10 regarads anjali
'I function in you, you function in me' wonderfull, Ammmmazing expression of love indeed..............10++
I is you.....you is me.Dependable and reliable...on each other........like the sea and the shores.......like the day and night.Im lookin forward to read more of yours Joseph. remarkable piece.
This is awesome.. Love the expression in it... ^-^