I Is You Comments

This is awesome.. Love the expression in it... ^-^

wow...very pretty poem...the best part was 'You function in me, I function in you. I is you.' well done....10 Hataw

A wonderful expression in choicest words. I liked the line 'I am the ship for the harbour of love' and the 'heavenly lace' to tie the two. Deserves a full ten. Regards,

wonderfully written! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! u get 10/10+++++++++++

nice expressions- you the wine--i the ship both stars entwined by the lace +10 regarads anjali

'I function in you, you function in me' wonderfull, Ammmmazing expression of love indeed..............10++

A beautiful poem, very nicely composed, like it.

I is you.....you is me.Dependable and reliable...on each other........like the sea and the shores.......like the day and night.Im lookin forward to read more of yours Joseph. remarkable piece.