Monday, September 8, 2008

I Is You Comments

Rating: 4.4

I am the stone, Rimbaud, you are the sun in our Liopetri*,
you the wine, me the ship going to the harbour of love,
we are two stars joined by the celestial lace.
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Joseph S. Josephides
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Lily Law 25 September 2009

This is awesome.. Love the expression in it... ^-^

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Little Hatila ;) 10 October 2008

wow...very pretty poem...the best part was 'You function in me, I function in you. I is you.' well done....10 Hataw

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Rangarajan Kazhiyur Mannar 26 September 2008

A wonderful expression in choicest words. I liked the line 'I am the ship for the harbour of love' and the 'heavenly lace' to tie the two. Deserves a full ten. Regards,

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Gargi Saha 22 September 2008

wonderfully written! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! u get 10/10+++++++++++

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Anjali Sinha 21 September 2008

nice expressions- you the wine--i the ship both stars entwined by the lace +10 regarads anjali

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Sarwar Chowdhury 21 September 2008

'I function in you, you function in me' wonderfull, Ammmmazing expression of love indeed..............10++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 16 September 2008

A beautiful poem, very nicely composed, like it.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 13 September 2008

I is you.....you is me.Dependable and reliable...on each other........like the sea and the shores.......like the day and night.Im lookin forward to read more of yours Joseph. remarkable piece.

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