Wednesday, July 18, 2007

I Invite Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

My arm
around your waist

this kiss
...
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Dónall Dempsey
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Dee Dee Wright 21 December 2007

Short and sweet and defiant. I like its brevity and the lover's triumph. I also like how it now becomes 'our face' courtsey of the kiss. A clever little thing that suckers the Big D. love Dee Dee

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Scarlett Treat 18 July 2007

What a charming poem for an apparently lovely lady...who touches others lives with her rainbow!

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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