Monday, July 10, 2006

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Surrendering, Compassion, my hand fitting in yours
Enthusiasm, Trust, the beginning of our lives
feeling all i can feel
being everything that s true and real
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Carike Klokow
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Original Unknown Girl 07 September 2006

I can identify we pretty much all of what you're saying here! I love the verse about the trying of a new glove, it's a metaphor I've used too. You convey beautifully your emotions. Keep it up! !

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Carike Klokow

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