I Hunger For More Of You Comments

You draw the reader into your deep rich love. 'I tried to shut the window of my heart from you, but it keeps on opening'. Powerful imagery and poem. 10 Karin Anderson

This is a true loving poem of the best kind. Willing to yield yourself to the one you love is a very vulnerable, yet powerful signal to the one you love. GW62

within you i lose myself without you i find myself wanting to be lost again In your embrace, i hunger for more of you.. a complete submission of yourself to the one you loved...it is a perfect combination of two hearts shared with true love...you found yourself in him..always in him..cheers... naizz

wonderful write....I could feel the depth of emotions....I wish I had some of what you write of here...still emptiness and no embrace....I miss the hugs: O)

Oh! refreshening! ............heartfelt.........nice! 10++

A lovely write, you have poured out your heart in this, 10 Lynda xx

The metaphor of love as food and drink is sublime and your poem shares the food and drink of your soul with great passion and some extra special lines. 'Wrapped up in yet another day' is very good, as is 'To shut off the windows of my heart from you'. Lovely write. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Meggie, your pour of genuine passion is like the pour into a goblet, from an open caraf of sweet wine...Excellent Work, young lady! FjR

Fine work Meggie, a heart filled with love