Tuesday, December 4, 2012

I Hope You Will Forgive Me Comments

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I have hurt someone for today
I know for it I have to pay
but I was not intended
the situation created
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Vizard Dhawan
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B.M Lewis 06 December 2012

If I was your friend, I would certainly forgive you. I love the way your structure your words together so that your meaning is clear. Good Job!

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Nader Baheri 05 December 2012

the feeling of apology is important when we hurt some one, only god can judge~nb

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Hazel Durham 05 December 2012

So heartfelt, a wonderful poem of apology to your friend!

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Kaila George 05 December 2012

oohh this is wonderful...love poems from the heart it just makes poems so more...real for me anyone and yes I hope you and your friend made up...wonderful

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Asif Andalib 04 December 2012

Nice write. Hope you will be forgiven

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