Monday, September 3, 2012

I Hope You See Comments

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Your friends say that your sorry
For rants and pain you caused
And that you knew they meant well
While you built up all those walls
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Dr Antony Theodore 29 December 2015

Fighting not against you But defending a lost soul Picking up the pieces To make you feel whole.. your foe was depression and not me...... life, love, relationship, its problems. all those you hve brought in, in this poem. thank you. tony

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Valerie Dohren 09 September 2012

Depression is a very difficult problem to deal with, both for the sufferer and their loved ones. Great write.

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Payal Parande 04 September 2012

a beautiful piece sir.. absolutely phenomenal........ a brilliant poem from a brilliant poet so i guess i am not surprised.... thank you for sharing this fantastic poem, love, payal

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