Tuesday, March 23, 2010

I Hope You Can Hear Me.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I still cant believe that your'e no longer there,
You left me alone, you didn't even care.
You went away on your own,
You left me out here all alone.
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Roshni Menon
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Jazib Kamalvi 13 January 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Roshni. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Surya . 24 March 2010

hi menon, never thought such poigant poem ill appea here.so touching.was it real happening? any way way voted full marks 10 would you care to read'potraits of the innocents'.it might help deviate the mood luv ravi

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Pradyumna Jyotir 24 March 2010

Somehow...this poem reflects my story...poignant.....read my poems u'll understand....

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