Saturday, June 22, 2013

I Hope For Better Times Comments

Rating: 4.5

I look forward to a day when
Depression is a thing of the past
Where anxiety has no grip on me
Where the birds of anger
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Allen Steble The Philosophical Poet
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Dinesan Madathil 27 June 2013

A highly optimistic note with an insight and a piece of advice for visualising a brighter future ahead. Your authentic words have an appeal though spoken to yourself in the first person.

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Neetha Sasidharan 22 June 2013

nice idea......nice title......kp going....

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Lorraine Colon 22 June 2013

Beautiful thoughts, but please, don't hold your breath waiting. Our world was not meant to be as you, and most of us, would like. I wish I knew why. But at least we can dream of better times and get some consolation from that. You did a great job on this poem.

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