Tuesday, January 20, 2009

I Hope Comments

Rating: 5.0

I hope
We can be like this forever
I hope
We can holding hands each other
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Shyuki Nawaii
COMMENTS
Lily Law 25 February 2009

I wish it as well... Nice work... ^-^

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Eddie Roa 20 January 2009

This piece can improve much more with the straightening of some grammatical kinks which is understandable coming from someone where English is not the mother tongue. Nice sentiment expressed candidly and spontaneously.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 20 January 2009

Your hope is my wish.Nice first piece Shyuki.

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