Saturday, March 21, 2009

I Hold These Random Thoughts Comments

Rating: 5.0

For quite some times…my beloved seems
to misunderstand things we've done
and what to do about those things.
I've grown weary sitting in that tempest pot
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Almedia Knight-Oliver
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 14 April 2010

Last two lines like a U Turn to me…twist and helical…and this added a legitimate poetic fragrance … Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Though at this time, I speak in understanding. The halves have illegitimately joined their mates..... ya thoughts always with understanding only.... good thinking on ur part and perfect understanding dear poet......10 read mine 'thought'

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Suicidal Magic 25 June 2009

i luv ur choice of words a very nice write 10++++

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