This night is frozen- in delicate frame,
When the rain lashed, rising waves rode
Over his heights of wisdom, giving in bliss
All melts into your elixir, my beloved- abode!
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Sizzling imagery that saunters with confidence and beauty of soul entwined with loving heart, superb write!
Melodeous to sing, dedicated to read. Thank you.
An awesome drop. With clever use of imagery you have mastered the art of story telling. Thanks for sharing.10+++
A refined poetic imagination, Deb. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.
A sublime ride through the darkness, raindrops opening a whole new field of beauty; an experience of delight, trusting in the beloved as flames of lamp-love continue to illuminate the darkness. Such a superb rhapsody of poetical meaning and rhythms of music. Totally love this poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn