Saturday, October 21, 2017

I Hold In My Bosom Comments

Rating: 4.9

This night is frozen- in delicate frame,
When the rain lashed, rising waves rode
Over his heights of wisdom, giving in bliss
All melts into your elixir, my beloved- abode!
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Deb Panda
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Roseann Shawiak 24 October 2017

A sublime ride through the darkness, raindrops opening a whole new field of beauty; an experience of delight, trusting in the beloved as flames of lamp-love continue to illuminate the darkness. Such a superb rhapsody of poetical meaning and rhythms of music. Totally love this poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Hazel Durham 22 October 2017

Sizzling imagery that saunters with confidence and beauty of soul entwined with loving heart, superb write!

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Melodeous to sing, dedicated to read. Thank you.

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 October 2017

An awesome drop. With clever use of imagery you have mastered the art of story telling. Thanks for sharing.10+++

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Jazib Kamalvi 21 October 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Deb. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Gajanan Mishra 21 October 2017

giving in bliss, beautiful write.

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