Friday, April 26, 2013

I Hide Behind My Heart Comments

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While, I breath
with life
tenderness,
doesn't, seem so hard,
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jodde taylor
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Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan 26 April 2013

interesting poem.... ideas strung together well....diction ok....imagery may be improved....

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