Sunday, February 24, 2019

I Heard The World Crying Comments

Rating: 4.6

I heard the world crying
As though she was dying,
And then came the rain
As though sympathy to her pain,
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Randy McClave
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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 January 2024

Scintillating and fascinating poem, lovely and poetic description, excellent rhymes and rhythm. TOP Marks,5 Stars Full for this enchanting poem. TFS

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Richard Wlodarski 09 September 2022

A magnificent tribute to Mother Earth! I really love this poem, Randy. Sincerest Congrats on receiving the honour of POD!

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Kevin Patrick 08 September 2022

Returning to this marvel of a work, a cry for our planet that we cannot ignore. Wish the masses understood this. Great work!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 September 2022

Excellent write about the enviroment

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Jayne Louise Davies 08 September 2022

Well done on Member POD. Well deserved x

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 October 2020

She was being polluted And her body was being looted, Myself and a million more sighed; She just cried. a beautiful poem on the crying world. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 March 2020

the poetic grievance is wonderfully expressed in this poem to the polluted world and to its liable persons /// congrats for being selected as POD

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Chinedu Dike 23 March 2020

A poignant bit of verse written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing.

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Aqua Flower 23 March 2020

Congratulations on this wonderful poem being selected Poem of the Day. An amazing poem crafted that depicts the demise of our future world.

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Kim Barney 23 March 2020

Great poem, Randy. One of your best, I think. Congratulations for having it selected AGAIN as member poem of the day!

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Kevin Patrick 23 March 2020

Apt work to be celebrated and included, we as a species have used and exploited this world, to a point were we have nearly caused a collapse, perhaps today nature is fighting back. Well done.

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Eva Mae Witt 23 March 2020

Congratulations Randy on making poem of the day. No truer words have ever been said, on how polluted our vast earth has become. Thank your for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 23 March 2020

The greed of humans has been giving untold misery to mother earth. It is being polluted beyond imagination due to emission of toxic gases into the air, toxic effluent into rivers and adversely affecting flora and fauna. Very beautifully crafted poem that makes great reading. A strong message to selfish humans too. Congrats.

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Lyn Paul 23 March 2020

A wonderful write. That we all need to read. Perfect to read at this time with the World virus. Are we being punished for our greed and carelessness in this modern world?

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Jayatissa K Liyanage 23 March 2020

Full course of human deeds that made her to moan, grieve and cry was vividly portrayed. Very insightful poem indeed. Congrats on your well deserved positioning. Thank you for sharing. x

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Rajnish Manga 23 March 2020

Excellent poem on the impact of all kinds of pollution and environmental degradation on the health of this planet which, in turn, adversely affects all human life, flora and fauna. TThanks for sharing.

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Ramesh T A 23 March 2020

Reality of the world is well depicted in this poem! Congrats to the Poet for the selection of his poem as Member Poem of the Day by PH!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 March 2019

Beautifully crafted thought provoking poem concerned with preservation of ecological balance. Congrats on poem of the Day.

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 March 2019

I heard the world howl Then I heard her growl, With her mighty winds and storms ..../////// great poetic expression

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Khairul Ahsan 23 March 2019

'We will ignore, and then us the world will deny; She will die' - these two lines sum up the poem well. Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

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