I can hear the raven sing,
I can hear the raven sing,
He calls out my name,
I can hear the raven sing,
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Seems you are a great lover of nature. it shows here in the poem.Very poetic and full of emotions. I love this
A feeling of newness develops with obvious repetition; 'a rainbow doubled' is very poetic.
Its not always one reads about a ravens song Your poem has this slow lilting rythmn to it....love it!