Monday, August 3, 2009

I Have You... Comments

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Sometimes I think I died within,
Burning ashes reduced to nothing..
Plans and aims are no more sound,
Targets and goals no longer bound..
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Abhijit Surve
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Mary Joy Lumanog 07 August 2009

I know the feeling..despite failures and hopelessness we still hold on to something..a hope that there's a person; ; whom you can lean on...it's so passionate and very touching..you made my heart shiver and I cried. Keep writing

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Christina Phan 04 August 2009

Heart touching poem 10+++

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Ruth Walters 04 August 2009

We are all different under the stars and yet so much the same. We all fear we've failed, yearn to be praised, yearn to be accepted and loved and you found it all in her arms.....lucky boy. Ruthy: -))

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Sonya Florentino 04 August 2009

last line says it all....nothing else matters.....

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Marieta Maglas 03 August 2009

touching poem.................

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Maitreyee Joshi 03 August 2009

good, you have someone so caring and patient.

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