I have walked these roads,
As have the one before me,
Through rain of storm,
From cloud of sky,
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The rhythm to this beats, the message is clear. You paint the picture well. It is enjoyable, too. t x
A closeness shared, wonderful expression Thankyou Geoff Love duncan X
amazing. i loved it. the second verse is so rich in feeling and wisdom. brilliant, G.
GEOFF...This is a superior piece of literary verse, possibly your best work, thusfar. '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
A great write! BRAVO! 'Upon my farrowed brow.' I was expecting 'furrowed brow' but I like your choice bette.