Wednesday, February 20, 2008

I Have Tried, Believe Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

i have tried blocking my ears
while he called you things you were not,
but the epithets were heart-rending
i have tried looking away
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Stella Sisanda Qishi
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Chinedu Dike 15 February 2018

Sad reflection on a horrifying experience elegantly crafted in persuasive poetic expressions. A well texted and nicely thought out poem. Thanks for sharing Stella.

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Koketso Marishane 29 August 2008

You really tried. I believe you. that's why I couldn't resist it but post it. I don't like reading with my heart but You really touched my heart when I read this..

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 03 March 2008

well, sometimes its just fated and destiny prevailed.

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Preeti - is here! 20 February 2008

This poem speaks of such suffering....but atleast you tried.....

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Broken Peaces 20 February 2008

That was a sad and painful write and God does know you tried 10 Chris

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Stella Sisanda Qishi

Stella Sisanda Qishi

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