Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, August 13, 2012

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So many times I have tried to end
Attempted at many things to mend
Bring about some attitudinal change
As it was very much within my range
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 August 2012

ANALIA FREE P.. No worry, no hurry... that is meditation. Thank you.

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Justin Reamer 13 August 2012

This is a very good poem. It is very well-written, and I can feel your emotion in it. I enjoyed it a lot.

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Rajendran Muthiah 13 August 2012

The benefits people get by silent prayers, worshiping, meditating by visiting abodes of God are said in a nice language. But when the people are misled by misinterpreting the teachings of the holy books, the places of worship become breeding centres of terror. A mind solacing, calm atmosphere prevails in this poem. Rated *****

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 August 2012

So many times I have tried to end Attempted at many things to mend Bring about some attitudinal change As it was very much within my range

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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