i have to go
it is time to know
iam not the woman in your drew
i have to go
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Look Honey if its how i understand it, dnt quit in life and hurry death coz there is still lot of future ahead of you. live that
Your thoughts have power but you got to make them look more expressive and should be able to make a link with the reader... Nive effort... you have the guts, just need to keep saying your heart... Regards, Kamran
it is good poem to and as i told you that you used strong and nice words. deceiving you face my miserable fate nice work hopeless
gorgeous? and maybe more.it shows that sb was sleeping and dreeming, and he has just woken up to feel the real life.and it's not a dream it's a journey that could be done just like a sweetdream...
i like it there is times when we should go to nowhere but we had to go ur words are really strong and reflect.good