I Have To Cross The Great Ocean Comments

Lovely poem. With God by its side even a boat with thousand holes crosses ocean in triumph.

The small boat gifted to me by the lord...my carelessness it has thousand holes...BUT I HAVE TO CROSS THE GREAT OCEAN. Lovely poem friend and so encouraging.

The small boat gifted to me by the lord...my carelessness it has thousand holes...BUT I HAVE TO CROSS THE GREAT OCEAN. Lovely poem friend and so encouraging.

Dear.Ramesh rai, It is a good poem. How to cross the great ocean? is a good question, Either take some time before you sail to plug the holes or better swim. V.K.Kanniappan

A beautiful way of expressing life threw words. Great poem..

ocean being time with turbulances and the boat being life....the holes in the boat being our follies..intention to cross the ocean i.e your belief on doing right.....great inspirational and spiritually inclined poem..really enjoyed..full marks (though i am no one to give marks)

[to reach your shore, row your life- boat with the oar of belief] wonderful poem/top marks! ! !

Magic!

Beautiful imagery is used to depict one's life. Great respect and love for life is smiling all around which takes the boat safely on ocean!

Beatifully written. Thanks for your comment. Blessed be

To reach one's destination, there may be so many barriers, Not enough resources, not a suitable carrier. But one must put the best effort to overcome the hindrance, Along with the full confidence and firm determination And finally he or she may be crowned with the success. With my appreciation for the piece and best wishes.