What words can strengthen my mortality?
What sounds can wake me from this worldly sleep?
Imagined obstacles appear too steep
to climb, in pain and weakness would I die
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This is a beautifully crafted sonnet. Embedding the soul of poetry is no mean feat.++10
Thank you Robert for your very generous comment, we all have the soul of poetry to keep!
Although mortality of man cannot be prevented still his words of wisdom may gain immortality. Monuments of words will last for long time even after death. Soul of poetry sings continuously. This is very beautiful and thoughtful poem very well penned...10
Excellent write. Beautifully crafted. It captures the very essence of poetry. A pure poetic joy. Yes, Poetry strengthens our mortality.10+++++