Sunday, July 1, 2018

I Have The Soul Of Poetry To Keep Comments

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What words can strengthen my mortality?
What sounds can wake me from this worldly sleep?
Imagined obstacles appear too steep
to climb, in pain and weakness would I die
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 July 2018

Excellent write. Beautifully crafted. It captures the very essence of poetry. A pure poetic joy. Yes, Poetry strengthens our mortality.10+++++

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Robert Murray Smith 01 July 2018

This is a beautifully crafted sonnet. Embedding the soul of poetry is no mean feat.++10

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Captain Cur 02 July 2018

Thank you Robert for your very generous comment, we all have the soul of poetry to keep!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 July 2018

Although mortality of man cannot be prevented still his words of wisdom may gain immortality. Monuments of words will last for long time even after death. Soul of poetry sings continuously. This is very beautiful and thoughtful poem very well penned...10

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Captain Cur 02 July 2018

Thank you Kumarmani, for your thoughtful insight on this poem.

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