I Have The Right Comments

Sure we must select the ‘choice’ not chance…till it is not detrimental or harmful to person or society…still there is flaw in this statement… thumbrule yet to be set by society …any amount of titration practice to include or exclude will prove futile… Vedic thought says ‘there is no work 100% good and 0% bad’ or vice versa … Your programme of life and living is by ‘Choice is better than Chance’…indeed commendable…thanks Sir.. 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

a lyrical RIGHT! an interesting done/ I have the right to justify my style, ......................................................... My way of life - my temperament - my smile. Thanks For Sharing your RIGHT

Well done! Two thumbs up!

A great poem John, very nicely written.

do not wish my customers to rile, It would offend to lie and cheat and steal, My way of life - my temperament - my smile. nice poem from soul

I am a huge fan of the villanelle and this one is just perfect! S :)

An interesting poem, but it's really difficult to follow the form! Thanks John for sharing!