Wednesday, September 2, 2020

I Have The Best - Barbie Doll Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a beautiful red dress,
Curly hair nicely combed
White shoes shining through
A tiny girl drops down from the golden car
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 04 September 2020

DJ appreciate your writing skills.10/10

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Michael Jack 03 September 2020

Touchy story with nice flow and full of human emotions. You are a keen observer.

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Varsha M 02 September 2020

A very beautiful but worthy story. Socioeconomic status plays a great role in our lives. Beautiful thought and lesson.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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