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will when i'm ganna love some one...i'm ganna change him i don't wanna like him so much so i can always make a decision like this

i fink you should do watcha have to do if someone really love you then would be wish you happy and surpport you forever....

It's a very light poem, but with a deep plea... I love how the story of the poem builds up...

That was truly express from your heart, if ur lover really love u then he will understand and support u..but it doesnt mean u should have to end...if there is no more understanding of him to u so u make a good choice..but one u make a choice it is hard to turn back..so keep on the road and never regret!

Well expressed., full of emotion. Rigourous write! ; D

To be where you are here is utmost one among your way of life. To go inner and forward, you've got to retrospect the way you went on.

Want to stop dating? Well, that's good for what you claim the reason is-to pursue your dream uninterrupted. Nice one. As you write more you know more and develop more. You have the potential to be a great poet. Don't renege on your effort.

in order to make your poem long, you keep repeating the same ideas, the same feelings.It's a bad thing. You have to understand that a poem has nothing to do with how long or how less you write. A poem has to express powerful feelings, contain hidden messages that ordinary people are not able to think those by themselves. I believe you have the potential to do so. You just need practice :)

do u know this poem is very very beautiful even i beleive that maybe with ur love u can reach what u dream and what u seek