Thursday, January 31, 2019

I Have Seen How God Becomes A Child Comments

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The doll pulling a baby cart with a doll
Can you read a promise in her smile?
If a child is launching it from a knoll
You'll see soon the cart is a projectile
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Aniruddha Pathak 19 July 2019

From 'The doll pulling a baby cart with a doll... to 'I have seen how God becomes a child! ' twelve lovely lines.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 February 2019

and sir we all r GOD'S CHILDREN OR WERE ONCE UPON A TIME

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 February 2019

Kids are innocent, sinless and pious! We can very well observe the divine attributes in each of their activities! A lovely poem.....10

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