Tuesday, June 28, 2016

I Have Risen Comments

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I have risen...
The fallen leaf
Has become the tree!
The tear, a shout of joy.
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Eric Cockrell
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Terry Craddock 29 June 2016

I like the way the first and last two lines encapsulate this poem, 'I have risen...' contrasted with a 'The fallen leaf' and the wonderful 'The grave, the birth of Wings! ' is a compelling transcendence, I love the way a few lines speak volumes

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