Monday, September 21, 2020

I Have Not Yet Finished The Lovely Book ! Comments

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The way you look at me
looks like an opening page of a novel
While you open and close your eyes
chapters of the interesting novel is turning on and on
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KAVIN CHARALAN
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Susan Williams 21 September 2020

What a novel idea- -yes play on word intended. But really this is a novel approach {oops did it again}... Ummm... this is quite an original approach to attracting a woman or describing a book attractively. 10... well, 5

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Sankaran Ayya 26 September 2020

Woman is not just any book. She is a novel that is more interesting. I liked and enjoyed your beautifully written comment poet Susan Williams . Thank you

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M Asim Nehal 21 September 2020

Fantastic one Kavin....Nicely written. I enjoyed it.5 *

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Sankaran Ayya 26 September 2020

Happy you enjoyed these lines Asim Thank you.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 21 September 2020

Good one. You know what sparked my imagination? If perhaps the last line was I have not finished reading the look. Or you can have your line and finish with this one

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Sankaran Ayya 26 September 2020

Yeah unfinished is finishing line of this poetry. Very nicely said comment Thank you poet Deluke Muwanigwa

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