Tuesday, April 22, 2008

I Have Not Lived My Life Alone Comments

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I have not lived my life alone
Lonely though I be.
I'm satisfied, just as I am,
To share the world with thee.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
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Cristy Upshaw 03 June 2009

your words, I feel, I have read many times. how deep and heartfelt they always seem. beautifully displayed, wonderfully written.

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Hadyn Rodriguez 15 March 2009

wow this poem is wow

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Madison Yeater 10 March 2009

LOVE THIS LINE! ! ! 'For when I cry, I feel again; My love, all through and through.' i feel again when i cry as well. i love how you percieved such imagery in this poem. it shows not only the tears, and pains of love, but it also shoes hope, and a grreat deal of compassion. nice piece! !

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Meggie Gultiano 25 February 2009

i lost words again, Wolfey..you must see and hear my heart beat, , aching and crying too, for that wonderful words..painful as it is..but releasing at the end, with two teardrops.... it is enough.. to shed that tears, a cleansing.. another delight for me, in this rainy night here in our place, God bless you, my freind, and do take care of you.. shalom, meggie

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Corey Campbell (BlackChild) 24 February 2009

I really love the way you write. Your style and the heart felt image that you portray. Its like reading a novel in poetic form. Great!

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Catrina Heart 11 February 2009

satisfaction and contentment have shelthered you on your life...Great and wonderful poem...10+++

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Christina Phan 30 January 2009

awww this really gd n remind me of my past experience. we all went tough times.

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Laurena Willetts 29 January 2009

this poem is written from experience as are all mine.it is very sad.easy to read because it rhymes and therefore flows.this is my kind of poem. always mor sensitive when the writer has gone through these feelings rather than imagined them . pam

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Reshma Ramesh 01 December 2008

such a beautiful and meaningful poem............i think it is great for a man to have the courage to cry....against the belief that men do not cry..........good write! !

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samar Halabi 12 September 2008

wonderful creative poem I really enjoyed it...well your way of writing poems specially love poems makes me remember an artist songs ' Chris De burgh ' really wonderful and great work.... makes me imagine every word thanks a lot

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Margaret Harrison 07 September 2008

this is a beautiful poem about life and dealing with it, it is really good and i will read more of your poems soon.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 30 August 2008

This is the way true love speaks...to reach there before his love reaches...another classical piece.

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nothing over 21 August 2008

This is a very well written poem. It conjures up thoughts of people that I have felt close to in my life

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Ron Flowers 02 August 2008

I really enjoyed reading this. You write the kind of poetry I enjoy reading, actually the kind I've enjoyed most of my life. Ron

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Kyle Shield Laster 21 July 2008

this is a very sweet piece...

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Sherif Monem 14 July 2008

Very well written and rich.

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DELETED NOW 26 June 2008

one more...? this one really made me cry....it's a great write.

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lila uzamkui 25 June 2008

this one really speaks out to me you are a very good writter please continue to make more that way i can continue to read more

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Sarwar Chowdhury 22 June 2008

beautiful expression! meter & ryhme have touched me!

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Philip Housiaux 12 June 2008

This piece is written in the Greenwolfe style - flowing meter with envelpe rhyme in quatrains that communicates easily. And yet of course it is the nobility and honest accounting of love and challenge, and health that sets this poem apart. A piece to be proud of.

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