Monday, August 18, 2008

I Have No Power Upon To Comments

Rating: 4.6

U Fooled me
U Cheated on me
U let me go
U made me cry
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Little Sunshine
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Sarah Sisson 13 December 2008

what a discription of your pain and understanding of it! Excellent!

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Manonton Dalan 05 October 2008

oh! my... slave of love. some truth in it. thanks.md

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Serenity Prayer 02 October 2008

wonderful job. i can relate, which makes it all the better.

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Nathaniel Booker 01 September 2008

Such a beautiful and heartfelt poem. Never ever blame yourself for someone else's emotional inadequacies, you'll find that the one that was meant to love you, has slipped away while you're wasting your time and energy on someone who doesn't appreciate the beauty in you. Be Well, Nate

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Jack Tex 25 August 2008

Well, I most definitely enjoyed the poem and I want to let you know about my stands on this matter, I think love is something no one can deny, but when it comes to bother you and disturb you, it's best you let go or it'll get you down and that's a fact.

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John G. Nelson 24 August 2008

Love is blind but also kind and not stupid. In the arms of those we find delight love seem pleasant, in the arms of those we find cruelties love seem bitter. It is a poem of the heart. I like it.

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Blue Eyes 24 August 2008

what a stupid guy he is! i hated him through the poem and that is what makes this poem great i felt your feelings towards him and i am sure that many others do

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