Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, January 3, 2012

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I have no where to go and hide
The world has been torn apart and made wide
I have no face to reveal cruelty being inflicted
Divinity is shamed and faith is dissected
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Margaret Beil 08 January 2012

This is a great write more thought for the pen! :)

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Blossom Mist 05 January 2012

it really speaks of the two facets that we humans have......simply beautiful

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Neetha Sasidharan 04 January 2012

really emotional.. nice rhyming set.. it's true dat evry cruel or bad minded people hv an inner face..a face of guilt and an urge to rectify all their deeds, but they couldn't. u hv nicely put d feelings of such people to words. gud job.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 January 2012

Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2 One cannot give up...We must be steadfast and go in search of truth, promised to set one free. A passionate and beautiful heart tugging verse. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves to Sing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 January 2012

Kaniz Fatema How Does it Feel To Be Your Own With No Direction Home Like a Completed Unknown Like A Rolling Stone................................lovely writing but this pic is so horrible. Yur fillings go on right direction.........express your thought what u feel right now...........thanks........Regards Kaniz. 2 hours ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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