Thursday, December 28, 2017

I Have No Memory Of You Comments

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You puffed off like the wind
Abandoned me
Without anyone to lean unto
Except the four elements
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Suresh Kumar Ek 06 September 2020

why creating a wall between us?

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Anjandev Roy 03 February 2020

Touching poem. Brilliantly penned. anjandev roy.

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C F 26 February 2019

A sad poem it appears of a child left in on its own to be nurtured by anoother sou and when the mother came back, the child rejected her for he has no memory of a mother. Very touching and well written poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 September 2018

How fate turns a person has been astutely and incisively delineated here. This poem is so moving. Brilliantly penned as sad poem on a child. Thanks for sharing.10

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A wonderful wall that wills to be fenced from the hurt of the past bleeding into the present. Lovely lines that are eloquently expressed! Well done gifted poet!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 June 2018

Suddenly you came Like a bombshell You forced your way Into my world Reminded me That you were the one Who gave my life......so much moving. A poem with sadness has been nicely executed.

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Robert Murray Smith 09 June 2018

A poignant write that is understandable.++10

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Akhtar Jawad 17 April 2018

Such a sad and touching poem of a child who was left alone in a world like this.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 January 2018

Suddenly you came Like a bombshell You forced your way Into my world -Excellent poem Rose! Enjoyed the poetic expression!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 January 2018

Thank you for your visit and great comment, Dr. Dillip.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 December 2017

Someone came along! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 December 2017

Thank you for your comment and visi, Edward.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 30 December 2017

The child 's heart was touched and she could not rid herself of a feeling of foreboding and discomfort........very touching indeed........and very well scripted...........thanks for sharing

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 December 2017

A great comment, Deepak. Very much appreciated. Thank you for your visit.

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Muzahidul Reza 29 December 2017

Mother and kids pictured here a little painfully, ......... great write, Thanks for sharing, the poem

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 December 2017

Your great comment and visit is much appreciated, Muzahidul.

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Yiyan Han 29 December 2017

Only those who love Can enter our hearts ... nice work

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 December 2017

Thank you, Yiyan for the great comment and visit.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 December 2017

Rose Marie, such a heartwarming write...10+++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 December 2017

Your comments are always appreciated, Bernard. Thanks for the time.

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Rini Shibu 28 December 2017

Angelic heart which nurtured at times of loneliness stays along forever, excellent poem

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 December 2017

Thank you, Rini for the great comment. Your visit is much appreciated.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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