You puffed off like the wind
Abandoned me
Without anyone to lean unto
Except the four elements
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A sad poem it appears of a child left in on its own to be nurtured by anoother sou and when the mother came back, the child rejected her for he has no memory of a mother. Very touching and well written poem.
How fate turns a person has been astutely and incisively delineated here. This poem is so moving. Brilliantly penned as sad poem on a child. Thanks for sharing.10
A wonderful wall that wills to be fenced from the hurt of the past bleeding into the present. Lovely lines that are eloquently expressed! Well done gifted poet!
Suddenly you came Like a bombshell You forced your way Into my world Reminded me That you were the one Who gave my life......so much moving. A poem with sadness has been nicely executed.
Such a sad and touching poem of a child who was left alone in a world like this.
Suddenly you came Like a bombshell You forced your way Into my world -Excellent poem Rose! Enjoyed the poetic expression!
Someone came along! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
The child 's heart was touched and she could not rid herself of a feeling of foreboding and discomfort........very touching indeed........and very well scripted...........thanks for sharing
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Mother and kids pictured here a little painfully, ......... great write, Thanks for sharing, the poem
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Angelic heart which nurtured at times of loneliness stays along forever, excellent poem
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why creating a wall between us?