I have looked at sunsets as long as they lasted
the reds and the golds and the pinks of them
the play of light on the edges of clouds
the changing shadows over the land.
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spectral...you have captured the essence of nature so well through resonant imagery
Paul, This is just captivating imagery! Stunning pictures perfect before readers' eyes
The sheer wonder of nature in words - '...an opening rosebud/in the crook of your elbow' is simply beautiful. If this poem were a painting it would take pride of place on my wall. S :)
Paul, the pictures you have placed before the reader is astounding! Excellent piece, vivid pictures.10!