Tuesday, January 4, 2011

I Have Given My Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have given my heart, loving you
Loving you, loving you
I have given my heart, loving you
Loving you, loving you
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Merna Ibrahim 05 January 2011

I really like the repetition in your poem, it emphasizes the meaning.. Well done, good work :)

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Ruerd Visser 04 January 2011

Well done, you have touched the heart

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Antonio Liao 04 January 2011

Like wind surfing beneath the smoothing face I conquer....'a transcending poem of emotion.....Excellent...thank you and God bless....a 10+++

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 04 January 2011

romantic and passionately sweet... thanks for sharing!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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