Wow---
I have found my rhythm
I have escaped from the dungeon
I hold in my hand pure sunlight
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Thank you all poets for your wonderful comments on this poem.I just discovered so many new comments here.
the rhythm that dances in step with the aspirations of life. Superb
Excellent poem Bharati that deserve much more than 5 stars
A brilliant write madam. I am wondering how did i miss this poem. Nothing less than 5***
Top Marks. It must gain its way to be Poem Of The Day.
A beautifully crafted poem woven by a Poetess with a kind and enlightened heart.
Cont. ..Yet, in creating our niche, we never destroy. We build to share for others.
Profound write, Bharati. Loved reading. " I hold in my hand pure sunlight". Wonderful expression. A five star rating.
Cont...and claim our own sky adorned with our own stars.
When we gain our freedom, we liberate ourselves to propel
A poem of great depth imbued with a meaningful message to humanity.
Rhythm of life fund with greater responsibility and we feel this new year has reflected new light. Reading this poem with great interest gives us satisfaction.
Fantastic verse, Bharati. It really expresses the joy of someone who has just discovered freedom in a meaningful way. trememndous write!
A glittering poem expressing the ecstatic mind that has escaped from the chains of long imprisonment
A delightful visual poem of great character, a joy to read.Thank you.
Finding rhythm of life through natural perception is a great thing. We have motivated life through greater readings od nature. An excellent poem is well penned.