Wednesday, December 23, 2020

I Have Found My Rhythm Comments

Rating: 4.9

Wow---
I have found my rhythm
I have escaped from the dungeon
I hold in my hand pure sunlight
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Bharati Nayak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 March 2021

Finding rhythm of life through natural perception is a great thing. We have motivated life through greater readings od nature. An excellent poem is well penned.

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Bharati Nayak 17 March 2021

Thank you all poets for your wonderful comments on this poem.I just discovered so many new comments here.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 January 2021

the rhythm that dances in step with the aspirations of life. Superb

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 January 2021

Excellent poem Bharati that deserve much more than 5 stars

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M Asim Nehal 13 January 2021

A brilliant write madam. I am wondering how did i miss this poem. Nothing less than 5***

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 January 2021

A marvelous poem that find its way to my heart.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 January 2021

Top Marks. It must gain its way to be Poem Of The Day.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 January 2021

A beautifully crafted poem woven by a Poetess with a kind and enlightened heart.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 January 2021

Cont. ..Yet, in creating our niche, we never destroy. We build to share for others.

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 January 2021

Profound write, Bharati. Loved reading. " I hold in my hand pure sunlight". Wonderful expression. A five star rating.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 January 2021

Cont...and claim our own sky adorned with our own stars.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 January 2021

When we gain our freedom, we liberate ourselves to propel

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 January 2021

A poem of great depth imbued with a meaningful message to humanity.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 January 2021

Rhythm of life fund with greater responsibility and we feel this new year has reflected new light. Reading this poem with great interest gives us satisfaction.

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M.J. Lemon 30 December 2020

Fantastic verse, Bharati. It really expresses the joy of someone who has just discovered freedom in a meaningful way. trememndous write!

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A glittering poem expressing the ecstatic mind that has escaped from the chains of long imprisonment

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Bharati Nayak 28 December 2020

Thank you all for your appreciation.

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David Wood 26 December 2020

A delightful visual poem of great character, a joy to read.Thank you.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 26 December 2020

Nice poem. Much uplifting

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Aarzoo Mehek 25 December 2020

Loved reading it. Beautiful piece of thought

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