I have felt Love
fermenting my nerves, and my blood,
raising my heart's pulse with velocity:
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I think this one could in my greek verse sound beautiful too.I may try it, if you wish it too, Mihaela.
Thank you, Mr. Galanis. I shall be honoured to have it translated into Greek.
Feelings in love nicely described in words. Emotions flowed freely and words covered the perfectly......100+++ I quote: I have felt Love immobilising my being with profound, hypnotic eyes becoming the addiction of my existence; I dissolved, and I dissipated in its clenching: floating deliriously in its river of reveries…
'I have felt Love' is a brilliant first line, especially when immediately followed by 'fermenting my nerves and my blood, raising my heart's pulse with velocity: banging the walls of my chest from within; ' this poem is a masterpiece, I will return to it with appreciation often in the next few days 10+++
I have felt Love becoming the addiction of my existence— I dissolved, and I dissipated in its clenching: floating deliriously, in its river of reveries.......so touching and romantic. Beautiful poem filled with addiction of love. Thank you dear madam for sharing this lovely poem.