Tuesday, December 27, 2016

I Have Felt Love! Comments

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I have felt Love

fermenting my nerves, and my blood,
raising my heart's pulse with velocity:
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 November 2018

I have felt Love becoming the addiction of my existence— I dissolved, and I dissipated in its clenching: floating deliriously, in its river of reveries.......so touching and romantic. Beautiful poem filled with addiction of love. Thank you dear madam for sharing this lovely poem.

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Dimitrios Galanis 08 March 2017

I think this one could in my greek verse sound beautiful too.I may try it, if you wish it too, Mihaela.

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Mihaela Pirjol 09 March 2017

Thank you, Mr. Galanis. I shall be honoured to have it translated into Greek.

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M Asim Nehal 15 January 2017

Feelings in love nicely described in words. Emotions flowed freely and words covered the perfectly......100+++ I quote: I have felt Love immobilising my being with profound, hypnotic eyes becoming the addiction of my existence; I dissolved, and I dissipated in its clenching: floating deliriously in its river of reveries…

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Terry Craddock 31 December 2016

'I have felt Love' is a brilliant first line, especially when immediately followed by 'fermenting my nerves and my blood, raising my heart's pulse with velocity: banging the walls of my chest from within; ' this poem is a masterpiece, I will return to it with appreciation often in the next few days 10+++

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