Friday, January 3, 2003

I Have Changed The Numbers On My Watch Comments

Rating: 4.6

I have changed the numbers on my watch,
And now perhaps something else will change.
Now perhaps
At precisely 2a.m.
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Brian Patten
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Tom Allport 30 July 2017

a nice poem of if we could only turn back time? maybe one day! ............well penned BP.

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Kim Barney 10 May 2015

I like the concept here, but there seems to be a word missing between lines six and seven. The flow is wrong there. Perhaps the person who submitted it made a typo.

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Bill Galvin 10 May 2015

A lovely expression of hopefulness.

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O Shege 10 May 2015

barren in stanzas but pregnant in meaning....thanks for sharing this.

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Chinedu Dike 10 May 2015

Lovely piece of poetry written with insight. Thanks for sharing.

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Brian Patten

Brian Patten

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