Monday, February 4, 2008

I Have Believed And Yet Have Not Comments

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I have believed and yet have not
and felt the bullets from both sides
who say it's harder to believe
while others say it's truth denied.
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Ben Partenay
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Jennifer Marie 05 February 2008

ben....i love the internal struggle here. the back and forth in the verses was poetically put, well expressed, and left me thinking. nicely done

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Mary Gordley 04 February 2008

A conundrum many of us face, but you put it into words so skillfully. Thank you.

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