Thursday, June 25, 2009

............I Have Been Thinking About.... Comments

Rating: 4.5

I have been thinking about you and me for long
Of our date, of our wedding, and of our beautiful roses
Jasmine, Shadan and another name from my heart
They will be grown by your light my loving sun
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Little Sunshine
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Sameer Ahmed 06 July 2009

Life without love is like a tree without blossoms or fruit. Love has no other desire but to fulfill itself. To melt and be like a running brook that sings its melody to the night. To wake at dawn with a winged heart and give thanks for another day of loving.......10/10

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Afzal Shauq 05 July 2009

you seem very couraggeous and theidea you did here in this poem is tribute type and intersting one.. if you try to manage the verses lite smaller will be more good... liked the idea..10++++++

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this is a very nice poem. it is very sincere........... thus perfect.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 01 July 2009

clicked ten and then smile! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Yasser Koor 30 June 2009

what a lovely poem. if we love someone we have to do the best we can to make this love an endless love. it is a wonderful to live in the earthy paradise with the lover. every word in this poem as a rose, so really u need a garden of roses to show ur love.

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Eyan Desir 25 June 2009

Yes that's the way keep loving be faithful...... Well said Sunshine keep shining bright

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 25 June 2009

Aww so beautiful for the love of your life... Hati 10 Always :)

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