She is walking barefoot on the dirt ground full of rocks and nails,
with clothes ripe all over her body.
Her legs at nights are like an open door,
welcoming the master to give her children.
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This is a fine example of free verse well spoken with a hint of mystery. It shows that you have the potential for expression of emotion that emanates from good poetry. Read mine – Everybody has had Somebody – Adeline Hint: no double space