I Have A Bird Inside My Belly Comments

perhaps your bird can say hello to my mouse: #10 in my list of poems: A Mouse In My Stomach.....[LONG; Human Body; Animals] 11/30/2012 the author, vishal, has requested that i read some of his work and comment on it. i would be glad to and have picked this one first because its title reminded me of my poem #10(at the moment) AND because i 'love' birds. chicken and turkey are nice in my stomach, but mostly i just like to see and hear alive wild birds. well my poem is perhaps less serious than I HAVE A BIRD INSIDE MY BELLY. i do like this poem. the message is unique and well-expressed. i guess if you are just following orders of the bird, you cannot be blamed for any poem and the bird should have to deal with any consequences. i like that you included a tribute to two of your poet friends. thanks for sharing.

Thanks for this write, but you shouldnt say that Vishal, you are getting better and better by days...i never started any writing, when i was 17 and poetry? haha no...just imagined you do great ones now, and just few years your talent getting bigger than ever...you have a bird inside your belly, so the bird may share you the wings and ability to take you high anytime sooner! ..do writing Vishal and you are heading to great journey as a writer, i know that...i proud to u now and will proud of you someday...this is your potential..dont give up on your dream..fight for it_Soul

the title of this poem has the beak and that is in the belly. Vishal Kumar. Good Luck to you as you wanted it.