Saturday, August 13, 2005

I Haunt Your Dreams Comments

Rating: 4.5

Evil grin slither thin
Power hungry lets begin
Battle faught
and battle won
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nikki hays
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Jonathan Robin 28 November 2007

All hail Mac Hays, Thane of Terpsichore... :) Well written composition but one would perhaps suggest that 'I' be systematically capitalized in your works because - inter alia - failure to do so can lead to the typo... ill never show which should IMHO read I'll never show... and thus lends itself to confusion Best regards, Jonathan

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Kee Thampi 11 May 2006

Dear poet, Really your poem is nice to read and keep in mind my best wishes I haunt Your dreams Evil grin slither thin Power hungry lets begin Battle faught Good wishes kee

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