Sunday, October 2, 2005

I Hate... Comments

Rating: 4.1

I hate the way you act
I hate the way you dress
I hate the way you smell
And you hair looks a mess
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miesha devres
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Erasmo . 01 August 2006

still lacks something wouldn't you say? it still needs a transition between hate and devotion...perhaps you could make it longer?

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Lylyanna Pilewski 16 February 2006

aww that was so cute i like it. Lylyanna

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miesha devres

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Memphis, TN, USA
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