I Hate You And Love Myself Comments

well thought of and written. It is a push and pull but the essence of it is well executed. Good job.

passionate, berating and reclaiming at the same time. Loved but loveless. You have put almost every emotion in this poem. It is a rich study of jealous people, in love, without love and I absolutely love the line 'I love myself' such an important thing to do.You have brought bitterness, love and heartbreak together in a richly woven poem. Very well done

Very, very good. I feel your outrage, I feel your love, I feel your betrayal in the entire poem. This is a very nicely worded piece of work that is thought provoking and indeed the things we all go through. I like it very much. Well done and Brava!

Well expressed, just a little unhappy about some of the vocab chosen, it is best not to mix modern and classical words, it destroys the rythms, but I did enjoy this poem and found many links to my personal experience well expressed for me by you!

Of your poem written, I think this one is the best.. I gave it 10 for being your best poem..

very nicely written :)