I Hate You! Comments

I think this poem is a very strong piece. I found I had to read it exactly how it is written; aggressive and loud and just at the end where it reads: 'One last thing I wanna say, this is something I need to say, ' I took quite a deep breath as I massively exaggerated the punctuation! The repetition in the poem seem to embellish your feeling with further anger and possible despair. Enjoyment flows through me at present so I will say it was enjoyable to read. Thank you.

Sometimes the hate you express is really hurt - especially when directed at mothers. This is a strongly written piece with which many readers will feel rapport. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

hate is not good. but if it makes you feel better to write about it then do it. to have that hate built up in you is not good. we write what we feel, and to write about it is a good thing.and like Jerry said replace the hate with love.

wow alot of hating....lol

Well written but there's a lot of hate in your life Amie. Replace the hate with love...

Like Sim Crowell always says..... ...Dreadful