Thursday, March 21, 2013

I Hate You Comments

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I hate the way you look, the way you talk,
I hate your style, I hate your cold smile,
And crocodile tears,
And I hate you because you're fake,
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Paula Glynn
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Aldrich Suarez 21 March 2013

I like this poem and I will try to read this when someone bullying me..

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Hardik Vaidya 21 March 2013

hi paula glynn i loved the use of anger in your poem, but it was too flat, i would have perhaps been more sinusoidal. but anger is an emotion best used naturally, perhaps you forced this one. you are born to be a nice human, anger is not your forte.

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Ajay Srivastava 21 March 2013

Do not hate person, it mean you are failure give some time & think why you fail. hate evil, or at least first hate evil then person who is following. once you hate evil, you have will certainly removed hate/ or minimum level of hate.

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Paula Glynn

Paula Glynn

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