Thursday, August 2, 2012

I Hate You Comments

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I hate you, you know
For how you make me feel
Standing beside this stick figure
The hole in my heart getting bigger
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Israh Sadan
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Kelly Seale 07 August 2012

Such raw, powerfull words here Israh, Brave, Beautiful You...standing up for yourself against him. Very Good Write! -Kelly.

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Saadat Tahir 02 August 2012

The hole in my heart getting bigger Tears burn behind my eyes, waiting for a trigger awesome....such a strong emotive exclamation, just two lines speak volumes.... blessings

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Israh Sadan

Israh Sadan

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