Wednesday, March 10, 2010

I Hate That I Love You (Remix) Comments

Rating: 3.5

I hate the way you can look at me
and I get lost in your gaze.
I hate the way you can see past
my looks and see who I really am.
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Kelsea Osterman
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a lovely poem....beautiful way of expressing! ! ! love it.....

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VEER the ultimate boy 02 April 2010

such a lovely n expressional poem like it 10+++++

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Will F. D. Blackman 16 March 2010

Well, you definitely expressed your torment and pain quite creatively. It's truly amazing what incredible powers of love has and what it instills in us, and what it makes us reveal, and do. So good job and keep using this forum to filter through what ails you.

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Juan Caballero 15 March 2010

Wow Kelsea - this is a tough poem full of Hate and Love. It seems like you are MESMERISED by this person. I guess it is a Young Man who has mannaged to metaphorically 'get under your skin'. This is a common phenomena as we go through life 'We always love the one who hurts us - and whose love for us does not match up to our own love for them'. The poem is telling me that you hate all the reponses you give to - His gaze - his jokes - his hurts - his failure to phone - his lies - his attitude and even - his support. the last couplet is very telling 'But really what i hate most of all - is the fact that I love you'. Love can destroy us Kelsea and what we have to do is to stand back and see what such a person is doing to us and make a decision to UNLOVE THEM. I know it is more easily said than done - but i had to do it several times - when i was a teenager - to wash certain ladies out of my hair if teir love was being destructive. I hope this helps - if thsi si a real 'cry from your hurting heart'. love in poetry - JOHN

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Justina Haner 15 March 2010

this one is even better......i really really like it

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