I hate the way you can look at me
and I get lost in you gaze.
I hate the way you can see past
my looks and see who I really am.
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This is how I feel 'bout Taylor. He means more to me and I hate that cuz he ain't love me back...it really does hurt.
great poem. very intense. no advice for ya cuz im there myself..sort of. ne wayz great write =)
It's a scary thing, letting someone inside, becoming too vulnerable. But don't try to stop what your heart is telling you to do, at least that's what I believe. Awesome poem though. Very consistent and resolute.
wow....dont look at the future....almost all future goes bad..so while it is good..enjoy it :)
Kelsea, this is a profound poem, from the standpoint that that's what love does to us all, in one way or another. Please remember that love is the most complicated of emotions, therefore eliciting the most complicated variety of expression. I was where you are now, I know what you feel, my dear. Listen to Joan Jett's song: I Hate Myself For Loving You. It might explain this a bit more to you. It did to me! I shall read more of your stuff soon and feel free to read any of mine. :)